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spend
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video
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games
. Because of that, Use synonyms
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the violent
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crime rate increases at a pace rate in some large cities of the world. I think, cruel Correct word choice
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games
are responsible to some extent but there are other factors Use synonyms
who
are more responsible of occurring that situation. Correct pronoun usage
that
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need
to take effective measures to reduce the effects of that problem.
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a need
video
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games
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are
gaining popularity among Correct subject-verb agreement
is
childrens
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children
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are Correct your spelling
which
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affecting
children
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brain
continuously. As per the reports, Pub g encourages Fix the agreement mistake
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crimininal
mentality, suicides and negative mindset Correct your spelling
criminal
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way, their mind is automatically controlled by these machines and they are unable to differentiate Linking Words
the
real and Change preposition
between the
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world. Correct your spelling
real
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video
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games
make Use synonyms
children
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15 years old
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15-year-old
Maharashrta
allegedly killed his elder brother who was scolding him Correct your spelling
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for
games
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over
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on
mobile
phone. Correct pronoun usage
his mobile
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children
become more addicted Use synonyms
of
playing Change preposition
to
games
and Use synonyms
could not
control themselves from playing Wrong verb form
cannot
it
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them
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make
their nature criminal.
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video
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games
are not solely responsible Use synonyms
of
rising crime rates in Change the preposition
for
an
urban areas. There are some societal factors Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
such
as poverty, unemployment and lack of proper education are the main reasons of happening Linking Words
these kind
of circumstances. So, Change the determiner
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government
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the neccessary
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to
people. So that, they can improve their standard of living Change preposition
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children
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a friendly
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children
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right
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spend
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games
only.
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children's
standard
and lack of employment opportunities are the main causes of Fix the agreement mistake
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this
can be eliminated only by taking immediate actions by parents and by official authorities.Linking Words
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