The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The provided maps illustrate an
island
in the pre and after-construction stand of certain tourist facilities. In brief, it is evident that the
island
, which is approximately 200 meters long, underwent fundamental changes and now appears to be inhabited and tourist-friendly. These transformations include but are not limited to: new accommodations, a pier, a restaurant and a reception.
Furthermore
, a swimming area is a part of the
island
now. Multiple constructions of brand-new accommodations on the west and in the middle of the
island
is one of the principal changes that occurred. These numerous houses are linked to each other by small footpaths. Between the two housing areas, a reception and a restaurant were constructed, which now give easy access to all sorts of meals and hotel staff.
Additionally
, in the west of the
island
, a swimming space was created.
Moreover
, a pier was constructed in the southern part of the
island
, allowing tourists to dock their yachts and boats.
However
, the eastern part seems to be unchanged at all.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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