You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The graphs below show the
ownership
of electrical appliances and amount of the time
spent during
Change preposition
on
housework
in households
between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, since 1940, when the percentage of households
with electrical appliances had increased rapidly, at the same time
the number of hours
of housework
per week decreased. From 1920 to 1980, vacuum cleaner ownership
had been increasing by 20% every 20 years and by 2000 over 100 percent
of owners had vacuum cleaners in their home
. In 1920 Fix the agreement mistake
homes
fourty
Correct your spelling
forty
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
households
had washing machines. After 40 years the percentage of washing machine owners increased by 30 percent
. By 1980 washing machines
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machine
ownership
was reduced to just under 63 percent
,after bounced
back to 70% by 2000. In comparison with other electrical Wrong verb form
bouncing
appliances
The percentage of Add a comma
appliances,
households
with refrigerators in 1920 was zero percent
. From 1920 to 1980 refrigerators ownership
had increased rapidly by 100% . Between 2000 to 2019 over 100% of ownership
had vacuum cleaners and refrigerators in their home . At the same Replace the word
owners
time
just under the
75 Correct article usage
apply
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
households
had washing machines.
In 1920 the amount of time
spent doing housework
was 50 hours
per week . From 1940 to 1960 hours
of housework
had been decreasing by 15 hours
every 20 years. By 1980 over 15 hours
was
spent on Correct subject-verb agreement
were
housework
. In 2000 the same amount of time
spent
doing Add a missing verb
was spent
housework
and by 2019 only 10 hours
spent
on Add a missing verb
were spent
housework
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, time, housework, households, hours, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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