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Band 5.5

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter •explain where you live •describe the problem •give reasons why you do not want this development

#plan #airport #flights #newspaper #•explain #•describe #•give #development
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Dear
sir
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/
ma'am
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, I writing in the context to show my
disagreemnt
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disagreement
 with
development
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the development
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 of
city
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the city
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 airport
although
 it is promising more services and
number
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a number
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 of flights.
Firstly
, My name is Soojana and I reside in
Sunet
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 area of Vancouver which is quite near to the domestic air station.
Secondly
, the problem is the humongous ground, which authorities will use
for making
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 it bigger airport is actually a place of entertainment for many.
Such
 various
occassions
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occasions
 and festivals are being celebrated there by
distnict
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district
distinct
communties
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communities
 from all
round
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around
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 the city.
Moreover
,
this
 is
only
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the only
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large
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a large
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 space
in
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apply
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avaliable
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available
 for
leisure
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the leisure
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pursits
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pursuits
 of
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people and to get together.
Furthermore
, the
enviornment
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environment
 will
also
 suffer because there will be
need
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a need
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 to chop off trees
for constructing
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 another unit for the air station. When people are actually trying to save more and more trees for the planet. I hope the authorities can understand
this
 message and can take
step
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 for the welfare of the local people and the local environment. Regards Soojana
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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on why the development is problematic, particularly from a personal perspective.
coherence cohesion
Use clear transitional phrases to guide the reader through the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-formulated and polite, establishing a good tone for a formal letter.
task achievement
You clearly mention your location and the specific issues, providing a suitable context for your argument.
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