The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar graph illustrates three methods of travelling to work and back
to
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home in 1960,1980 and 2001 in Europe.
Overall
, travelling by car to the office and home was seen in the
year
2000,
while
people
preferred the bus for travelling during the
year
1980 and in 1960 the majority of the public used to reach
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their offices by walking. During 1960, the majority of the public used to travel to their workplace by walking which was 37% in total.
While
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travelling via bikr and busses remained between 15-30%.
People
in 1960, travelled least by card, which was up to 5%. The mode of transportation in 1980, was mainly via busses and cars, which were approximately 25% and up to 22%. In comparison
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bikes and feet,
which
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were preferred least among them. In the
year
2000,
due to
advancements in
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technology,
people
started travelling in their own cars which were 40% of all other transportation modes.
While
more than 15% of the
people
kept travelling to their homes and offices, on their feet. Only up to 5% of the public travelled by bike in the
year
2000.
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