The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph demonstrates data about the variety of pineapple imported by 3 countries to the world in the period from 2009 to 2019,
while
the pie chart illustrates the percentage of a breakdown of the trade to the consumer of each pineapple in the 7 categories in 2019.
Overall
, it is obvious that the number of
country
A increased sharply ,having gone to pick point ,but that of in
country
B experienced a rocket decline throughout the period of 10 years,starting from 2009 ,
whereas
the proportion of distribution & retail in pie one led the pack ,these fraction in producer and export cost was at the bottom of the list within 2019. When it comes to how many pineapples
exported
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by
country
A in the first decades , starting from 2009 ,
then
, it went up rapidly from 1000000 to 10 million ,but that of
at
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country
B experienced a considerable decline to 1500000 ,beginning from over
the
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4000000. Interestingly, they remained almost unchanged from 0.5 to 1 million in the given periods. As regards the ratio of the distribution and retail in the pie chart ,it was the most popular category and accounted for 35%.
In addition
, the profit and taxes stood at over 15% at 18 and 16 , respectively. In terms of less popular , they accounted for 5% and 4% , in turn.
However
, international transport and import licenses were 3 times higher than less one in 2019.
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