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Many students today may stay abroad for a part or for all of their course. Although studying abroads has many benefits for the individual student, it also has a number of disadvantages To what experience do you agree or disagree whis this

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Nowadays, many graduates want to stay abroad for all their
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. I agree that studying abroad has many benefits for the individual student.
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, it offers a unique opportunity to experience new cultures, which can improve a
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 and understanding of the world.
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, studying in a foreign country often means access to top universities.
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 can develop both academic and career prospects.
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, living abroad often
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self confidence
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 and changes the world view.
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 personal growth can have lasting benefits boosting confidence and resilience. In conclusion,
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 there are challenges to studying abroad, the benefits in terms of personal and professional development often make it a worthwhile experience for many students.
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Strong introduction and conclusion that clearly state your stance and summarize key points.
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Logical structure with each point followed by clear explanation.
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Good development of ideas related to personal and professional growth.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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