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The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
Vietnamese
students
 pursuing their studies in two European countries and
America
 from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, France and Russia
being
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are
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 the
highest
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apply
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countries that
has
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have
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a
Correct the article-noun agreement
Vietnamese students
a Vietnamese student
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Vietnamese
students
studied in
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studying
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 there, and
America
being
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is
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 the lowest
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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.
However
,
at the end
 of the period,
America
being
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was
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 the
most
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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country
for
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with
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having
Unnecessary verb
apply
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a
Correct the article-noun agreement
Vietnamese students
a Vietnamese student
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Vietnamese
students
.
Vietnamese
students
 studied in France and Russia stood at 3
millions
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million
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 and 3.5
millions
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million
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, respectively. 2010 saw a decrease in the number of
students
 (around 1
millions
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million
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 falls). Despite
of
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apply
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the
decreased
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decrease
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 in 2010, the next 5 years showed a significant increase
of
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in
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students
,
reached
Wrong verb form
reaching
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 4.5
millions
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million
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 in France and 2.5
millions
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million
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 in Russia
at the end
 of the period.
On the other hand
,
although
America
 had the lowest number of
Vietnamese
students
 in 2000 (
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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only
Add a missing verb
was only
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 1.5
millions
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million
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) for the next 15 years,
America
gave
Verb problem
had
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a
Change the article
the
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 highest number of
Vietnamese
students
 among the two other countries. There was a sudden increase, reaching 5
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
students
 in 2015.
Submitted by Agreita Salsabila on

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vietnamese, students, america, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • chosen to study
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