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The table gives information about department and online stores in Australia in 2011

The table gives information about department and online stores in Australia in 2011
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The following table illustrates the information about distance and
department
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shops
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 in Australia in 2011.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the online
stores
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 have the greatest results in all four categories,
while
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 the
department
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stores
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 are the lowest.
However
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, both of them have almost similar results in a percentage of growth. As can be seen, the number of businesses in
department
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stores
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 is not as much as
a
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the
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 number of businesses in online
stores
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, at 67,
while
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a
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the
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 number of businesses in online
stores
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 was 368. At the same time, the profit of
department
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stores
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 was 807
AUD
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,
while
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 the profit of online
stores
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 was greater than
department
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stores
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, at 863
AUD
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. As the table shows, the sales revenue of online
shops
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 was 13400
AUD
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 in 2011. In 2011, the sales revenue of
department
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shops
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 was 12700
AUD
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.
Moreover
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, the growth percentages of
department
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 and distance
shops
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 were almost the same, at 4% and 6%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words department, shops, stores, aud with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revenue
  • customer satisfaction
  • product range
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • observable trends
  • shopping habits
  • preferences
  • traditional department stores
  • online shopping
  • significant differences
  • comparison
  • examination
  • analysis
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