People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Manager,
I am writing
tis
letter regarding facing Correct your spelling
this
internet
connection problems
in our divition
.
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division
firstly
, I have to explain in
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apply
this
problems
recently we Fix the agreement mistake
problem
are
facing poor Wrong verb form
have been
internet
connection in our area. most of
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apply
people
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the people
using
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use
internet
for various Add an article
the internet
perpouse
. when we use Correct your spelling
purposes
purpose
internet
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the internet
have
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clear
this
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at night
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9.30 PM.
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, above
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at
therefore
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the internet
internet
for intetining,many Capitalize word
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sdutents
are using Correct your spelling
students
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the internet
internet
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purpouse
and many Correct your spelling
purpose
purposes
womens
are seeing drama Correct your spelling
women
continusly
. Correct your spelling
continuously
therefore
, It has many strugglt
us.
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struggle
Lastly
, when we use your internet
connection you and we will be
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apply
benifits
more. Correct your spelling
benefit
therfore
, you should solve Correct your spelling
Therefore
this
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this problem
these problems
problems
very soon. If you clear this
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this problem
these problems
problems
,we will be apreciate
and Correct your spelling
appreciate
appreciated
thanking
you.
I will expect your Wrong verb form
thank
commants
soon.
Yours Faithfully,
RaamCorrect your spelling
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Structure
Try to organize your letter into clear paragraphs: one for the problem description, one for explaining the effect, and one for your suggestions. This will enhance clarity.
Grammar
Please pay attention to spelling and grammatical mistakes as they can distract the reader and obscure your message.
Tone
Make sure to use a formal tone consistently throughout your letter, given the context of a complaint to a company.
Structure
Your letter structure with greeting and closing is adequately followed.
Content Coverage
You have included all necessary elements to address the task: the problem, its effects, and suggestions for resolution.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite