People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
Happy Thursday,
I am Sam and writing
this
letter to you to draw your attention towards our Marks Avenue locality where we all are suffered
from internet connectivity . We Wrong verb form
suffering
preffered
your company because of Correct your spelling
preferred
high quality
range but from Add a hyphen
high-quality
last
months we faced disconnection continuously. The main cause we think, the
towers which are far from the place where we lived. So, we want to Add a missing verb
is the
took
Change the verb
take
an
immediate action on it.
Most individuals work remotely, including me in the locality and we have to complete projects in a particular time. Because of that problem, we are unable to do it properly. Remove the article
apply
Also
, our children are taking their online classes from their home. So, internet
Correct article usage
the internet
effect
their schedule of study badly.
Our locality wants you to solve Replace the word
affect
this
issue promptly. We humble
request you to visit Change the adjective
humbly
in
our area and provide us range from nearby towers if it is possible or Change preposition
apply
otherwise
set up new towers for the betterment of our society.
Hope to hear back from you soon!
Yours Faithfully,
Sam.Submitted by kaurjagdeep2097 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity by organizing ideas into distinct paragraphs for each point.
task achievement
Be more concise and direct in describing the problem and proposed solutions.
coherence cohesion
Greetings and closings are polite and appropriate, enhancing the letter's tone.
task achievement
The writer clearly outlines how the internet issue is impacting work and education.