Logging of the rainforests is a serious problem and may lead to animal and human life extinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The number of rainforests felled is increasing daily.
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problem influences the natural world and humanity, destroying crucial rules and structures of the environment. I absolutely agree that Linking Words
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trouble has significant implications, which are quite dangerous and frightening.
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To begin
with, terrestrial animals are suffering mostly because of losing their habitat. It leads to extinction of populations and rising numbers of endangered species in many areas. Everything is connected to the forest's ecosystem, and that's why it can be crushed by removing only one stage. Linking Words
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, the disappearance of mammals can cause increasing in carbon dioxide in the air, which has bad consequences on people's breathing systems. By the way, Linking Words
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tendency damages the biodiversity of small organisms, which allows people and animals to live on Earth, providing opportunities for vital processes, Linking Words
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as breathing, nutrition, and reproduction. Linking Words
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, the logging of rainforests has a huge impact on flora and fauna.
Soil erosion indeed stems from deforestation. By cutting down trees, the upper layers of soil are destroyed, so soil fertility goes down. Linking Words
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means that fewer types of plants can be grown in Linking Words
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area. It is a reason for the harvest reduction, changing to worse economic conditions. Linking Words
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, a company produces natural fertilizers made from rainforest living plants. In Linking Words
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case, the company has enough problems with salaries, going down sales promotions, and contracts with partners.
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To sum up
, logging industry actions can be compared with a delayed time bomb for the ecological situation. I am sure that in the future reaching a solution to Linking Words
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problem is going to be the most important question in order to save our environment.Linking Words
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Consider adding more specific examples to further illustrate your points on how logging affects biodiversity and economies.
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Try to ensure all points are equally developed. The effects on human society and economies could be further elaborated.
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Enhance logical transitions between ideas to improve the essay's flow, possibly by expanding on how each consequence builds on the previous.
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The essay presents a clear and comprehensive view on the impact of rainforest logging, addressing both environmental and societal implications.
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The introduction effectively sets the scene, and the conclusion neatly summarizes the main points, reinforcing the central thesis.
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Main points are supported and explained, especially the link between deforestation and ecosystem disruption.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite