You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. in your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to providing you with my
overall
feedback on your famous cookery Linking Words
course
"Master Cafe".
I have completed a three-month crash Use synonyms
course
which is called Master Cafe, and it was a wonderful experience with one of your instructors Miss Joan. She taught me how to bake multi-layered Use synonyms
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learned how to make gluten-free Linking Words
cakes
, which was amazing for me because my husband has an allergy to gluten. So, I can cook special treats for him now.
After completing the Use synonyms
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cakes
for my friend's birthdays Use synonyms
as well as
for my family event from which I got great feedback and compliment. Linking Words
Also
, I make the cake at home every two weeks. I used my class notes in order to give a perfect look to my homemade Linking Words
cakes
.
I was thinking of making my hobby into a profession of making Use synonyms
cakes
for weddings, so I would like to ask you about the Use synonyms
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. If any seats are available Use synonyms
this
December please inform me immediately, so I can submit my application to join the Linking Words
course
.
I look forward to your reply.
Kind Regards,
Md Monirul Khan HaidherUse synonyms
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Your letter could benefit from a more explicit description of your enjoyment during the course. While you've mentioned learning specific skills, elaborating on the experience itself would strengthen the response.
coherence cohesion
Including transition words or phrases to guide the reader through your points can enhance the logical flow of the letter. This ensures smooth movement from one idea to the next.
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The letter comprehensively addresses all parts of the prompt, providing a complete and relevant response.
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The tone is polite and suitable for a formal feedback letter, maintaining professionalism throughout.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and contribute to a polished letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite