The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures compare the layouts of a school in 1985 and now.
It is clear that
the road, that used to
across
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the middle of the school, has now disappeared.
However
, the locations of the office and the main parking space haven't changed, except the shape of the car park.
In contrast
to the past, they have downsized the playing fields and have built
pool
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and fitness centre next to it. As the population of
the
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students has increased, the school nowadays has one more classroom. At the same time, they transformed
2-story
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a 2-story
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classroon
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classroom
into
3-story
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a 3-story
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one. In the present, we can see a new facility,
wich
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which
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is
learning
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a learning
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resources centre with
computer
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a computer
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room inside. It is located
at
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where the library was in 1985. Unfortunately, it can be seen that they removed the small parking lot and
they
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relocated the classroom on the left side to the place between the learning resources building and the new sports centre.
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