The diagram below shows how instant noodies are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The illustration depicts data about the
process
of production of instant noodles
.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the process
starts with the storage of flour and ends with instant noodles
ready to consume. The process
is totally automatic and contains eight main steps.
According to
what is shown, the flour moved on to a mixer to produce a dough by adding water and oil. After
this
, the dough is put into a Roller machine to make a flat dough and stripped in four steps, which is easy putting them in discs.
In the sixth step, the machine starts drying and cooking noodles
with adding oil.Following
this
, the noodles
put
into cups that contain vegetables and spices. Add a missing verb
are put
At the end
of the process
, we make the cups ready to sell by labeling the
with company logo.Correct pronoun usage
them the
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