The diagram below shows how instant noodies are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how instant noodies are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The illustration depicts data about the
process
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of production of instant
noodles
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the diagram that the
process
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starts with the storage of flour and ends with instant
noodles
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ready to consume. The
process
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is totally automatic and contains eight main steps.
According to
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what is shown, the flour moved on to a mixer to produce a dough by adding water and oil.
After
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this
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, the dough is put into a Roller machine to make a flat dough and stripped in four steps, which is easy putting them in discs. In the sixth step, the machine starts drying and cooking
noodles
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with adding oil.
Following
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this
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, the
noodles
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put
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into cups that contain vegetables and spices.
At the end
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of the
process
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, we make the cups ready to sell by labeling
the
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them the
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with company logo.
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