The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK  from 2001 and 2008
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of five
proteins
of fruits and vegetables by three different people
Men
,
women
and
children
per day for 7 years , from 2001 to 2008 in the UK. From an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that there was a noticeable decrease which was the most consumption ,from 2001 to 2005 for consuming fruits and vegetables by
women
,
however
, in 2005 it slightly fell . One point which is considered is the fact that
children
and
men
used 7 different
proteins
with a steady proportion , from 2001 to 2003 , they consumed around 13 per
cent
which is steady for
children
,and 17 per
cent
belongs to
men
, but, from 2004 to 2006 ,they used fruits and vegetables with a slight increase from 20 to 27 per
cent
, using
proteins
by
children
in 2004 was noticeably grew for about 17 per
cent
and
this
upward trend was constantly continued to 2006 by 22 per
cent
,
however
,
men
and
children
have consumed a slight percentage of
proteins
which is a downward trend in 2007 and 2008, for
men
it was 27 per
cent
in 2007 and
then
decreased slightly 21 per
cent
in 2008.For
children
in 2007 was 26 per
cent
and 23 per
cent
in 2008.
On the other hand
,the most consumption in
this
period belongs to
women
,in 2001 ,they applied about 22 per
cent
and for the next years, there was a moderately grow to 2005 for about 30 per
cent
and in 2006 ,
women
used
proteins
the most to 35 per
cent
, but after that in 2007 and 2008, they had decreased consuming
proteins
to 32 and 30 per
cent
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Portion: a serving size of food.
  • Trend: a general direction in which something is developing or changing.
  • Demographic: related to the structure of populations.
  • Awareness: knowledge or perception of a situation or fact.
  • Socioeconomic status: a person's economic and social position based on income, education, and occupation.
  • Accessibility: the quality of being easy to obtain or use.
  • Guidelines: a set of recommendations or advice on how something should be done.
  • Subsidy: a sum of money granted by the government to assist an industry or business.
  • Lifestyle: the way in which a person lives.
  • Public health: the health of the population as a whole, especially as monitored, regulated, and promoted by the state.
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