The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of five
proteins
of fruits and vegetables by three different people Men
, women
and children
per day for 7 years , from 2001 to 2008 in the UK.
From an overall
perspective, it is obvious that there was a noticeable decrease which was the most consumption ,from 2001 to 2005 for consuming fruits and vegetables by women
, however
, in 2005 it slightly fell .
One point which is considered is the fact that children
and men
used 7 different proteins
with a steady proportion , from 2001 to 2003 , they consumed around 13 per cent
which is steady for children
,and 17 per cent
belongs to men
, but, from 2004 to 2006 ,they used fruits and vegetables with a slight increase from 20 to 27 per cent
, using proteins
by children
in 2004 was noticeably grew for about 17 per cent
and this
upward trend was constantly continued to 2006 by 22 per cent
, however
, men
and children
have consumed a slight percentage of proteins
which is a downward trend in 2007 and 2008, for men
it was 27 per cent
in 2007 and then
decreased slightly 21 per cent
in 2008.For children
in 2007 was 26 per cent
and 23 per cent
in 2008.
On the other hand
,the most consumption in this
period belongs to women
,in 2001 ,they applied about 22 per cent
and for the next years, there was a moderately grow to 2005 for about 30 per cent
and in 2006 ,women
used proteins
the most to 35 per cent
, but after that in 2007 and 2008, they had decreased consuming proteins
to 32 and 30 per cent
.Submitted by takhtejamshid1400historikal on
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