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the charts below show the number of japanes tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and australias share of the japanese tourist market . wirte a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

the charts below show the number of japanes tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and australias share of the japanese tourist market . wirte a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given charts illustrate the
number
 of
Japanese
 visitors who
traveled
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 overseas between 1985 and 1995.
Also
, the Australian portion of the
Japanese
 travel market. 
Overall
, the
number
 of
Japanese
 tourists is increasing every year from 1985 to 1995.
Additionally
, Australia's
share
 was growing.  In 1985, the
number
 of
Japanese
 individuals was around 5
million
;
then
, in the following years, it grew until it changed
into
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to
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 16
million
 people
traveling
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travelling
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 abroad. 
That is
 why Australian
share
 percentages were rising from 2
percent
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per cent
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 in 1985 to 5
percent
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per cent
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 in 1988. The
share
 counters a slight decrease in 1989, but it
starts
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started
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 growing rapidly up until it becomes 6
percent
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per cent
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 in 1995. To
summrize
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summarise
, The charts show an annual increase in
Japanese
 tourists from 1985 to 1995, with Australia's
share
 growing from 2% in 1985 to 6% in 1995. The
number
 of
Japanese
 individuals in Australia increased from 5
million
 in 1985 to 16
million
 in 1995.
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