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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: oapologize for what happened oexplain why you missed the deadline otell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter to apologize
to missed
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for missing
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deadline
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the deadline
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 for a project. As I
am
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have been
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 working in your company
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 10 years.
This
 was the first time I
could
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was
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 not able to
completed
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complete
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 my assignment in
given
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a given
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 frame
time
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of time
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.
Moreover
, I want to tell you
reason
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the reason
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 behind
this
 issue.
Last
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The last
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 day when I had to submit work to our client my
house
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house's
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 wifi
shutdown
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shut down
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due to
 rain and
storm
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a storm
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. Eventually,
whole
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the whole
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 night wifi
could
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was
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 restored and not able to submit my task. In the
last
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,
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I want to
say
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tell
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 you that I
had
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have
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 made
my
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up my
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 mind that I will submit my work before the submission day so that I avoid
deadline
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the deadline
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 and my company will not face any financial
lose
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loss
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 just because of silly mistakes which
had
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happened
with
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to
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 me. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side and hope you understand my problems . Yours sincerely, Navdeep
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task achievement
Try to provide more precise reasons for missing the deadline and how it impacted the client.
coherence cohesion
Improve connections between sentences and paragraphs for better logical flow.
greeting and closing
The letter adheres to the correct format with a clear greeting and closing.
complete response
The apology and explanation are clearly stated, and there's an attempt to provide a resolution.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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