The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
line
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graph provides key information about the number of participants in four different
sports
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over twenty years. The horizontal
line
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presents the years when four
sports
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have taken place,
whereas
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the vertical
line
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presents the number of candidates who participated.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that, in 1885 sport
rugby
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was the highest among all
sports
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. In 1990
people
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who played
rugby
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sport at 200 participate.
whereas
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, in 2005 was the least favourite of all the
sports
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.
According to
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what is shown, in 1995 tennis and
rugby
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overlapped at 200
people
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. As for, in 2000 tennis apply increased to 200
people
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but
rugby
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declined to 150
people
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. Tennis slightly increased from 150 to 210
participated
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participants
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. In terms of, badminton and
basketball
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were least liked of all
sports
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between 1985 to 2005. Not only but
also
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, badminton and
basketball
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were similar in the numbers of participants.
In addition
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, between 1985 and 2005
apply
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apply
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badminton and
basketball
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were aligned with no major differences
giving
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given
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apply
basketball
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was the upper
line
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, sports, rugby, people, basketball with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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