The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 1995 compared with the average house prices in 1996 to 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 1995 compared with the average house prices in 1996 to 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart depicts a comparison of the percentage change in average house
prices
in five different cities between the
period
of 1990 and 1995 to 1996 and 2002.
Firstly
, the price for London houses
were
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lower by more than 5% in the first time span, which is the
period
between 1990-1995,
while
it significantly surged and reached approximately 11% higher in the next span.
Furthermore
, other cities
such
as New York
also
experienced a similar increase in price scenario, which started from a drop of 5%, and transformed to a positive position of 5%.
Conversely
, Tokyo was the city with the least change to
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trend of house
prices
during the given time from approximately -7% in the beginning and just
reached
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-5% by the end of the span.
In contrast
, during the
period
1990-1995, changes
of
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cost in Frankfurt increased by 3%.
Nevertheless
,
afterwards
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it fell down by 2% in 1996-2002.
Lastly
, Madrid gained a slight increase in the average
prices
of houses which stayed under 5% from 1990 to 2002. From an
overall
perspective, it was easy to see that house costs fell significantly in Tokyo, London and New York in the
period
1990-1995,
while
for 1996-2002
prices
showed an upward trend, especially in London.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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