The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Integration problems for people living abroad
The bar graph gives us information about three different issues that
people
have when they are immigrants depending on their age.
The greatest trouble is the sanitary attention mainly in the medium age group with more than 37 percent
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although
the other two groups have a range between 33 to 36 percent
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in contrast
above all
with the people
aged 35-54 who suffer almost 20 percent
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people
aged 18-34 with a small minority over 5 percent
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On the other hand
, there is another trouble which is most general in all analysed groups, it is the economic organisation with quantities among 26 to 36 percent
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middle-aged
people
there is only one point of difference.
Overall
, comparing each one of the issues, it is clear the three problems are so important to take into account for the medium aged people
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to have healtcare
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secondly
to order their economy and finally
, to get school access. For people
over 55
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