The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares air pollution
level
by three factors, electricity generation, transport, and industry, in distinct countries for one year.
Fix the agreement mistake
levels
It is clear that
China showed the highest figures for all mentioned causes, comprising around 60, 70, and 80 PPM
respectively.
In the case of Australia, the figures for all the sectores
were under 20 Correct your spelling
sectors
PPM
, which were the lowest numbers in transport and industry. However
, electricity was the second lowest, following
by Japan. Wrong verb form
followed
Also
, Japan had relatively low numbers compared to America or China, whereas
, in the industry sector, it was higher than America, accounting for slightly higher than 40 PPM
.
In the USA, the category which
people produced the most pollution in the air was transportation. It amounted to around 58 Change preposition
in which
PPM
which was the second highest across all the areas. On the other hand
, the other two categories in the same country comprised 30 PPM
each. It was twice as low as the tranport
sector.Correct your spelling
transport
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