The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
process
of making soft Use synonyms
cheese
from fundamental to the product.
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Overall
, producing soft Linking Words
cheese
is a man-made linear Use synonyms
process
with five steps. It begins with mixing water and milk and ends with cooling Use synonyms
cheese
at 5 Use synonyms
degrees
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Celsius
for 6 Use synonyms
hours
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then
releasing the wastewater.
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To begin
with, water and milk are mixed well. After that, it will cold brew at 5 Linking Words
degrees
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Celsius
for 2 Use synonyms
hours
, which will cool to a certain degree. In the subsequent stage, the proportion of Use synonyms
cheese
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that is
cooled in the previous step with salt will come to the fermentation stage at 35 Linking Words
degrees
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Celsius
in 6 Use synonyms
hours
. Use synonyms
This
mixture will be delivered to the steam room at 100 Linking Words
Celsius
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degrees
and carry out the Use synonyms
process
of evaporation in 8 Use synonyms
hours
.
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Finally
, after evaporation of soft Linking Words
cheese
which continues cooling to a thick liquid at 5 Use synonyms
Celsius
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degrees
in 6 Use synonyms
hours
. Use synonyms
This
cooling Linking Words
process
wastes much more time than the cooling step in stage 2. From Use synonyms
this
, the amount of wastewater will be removed outside and leave behind the substances that form soft Linking Words
cheese
. Use synonyms
This
is the way soft Linking Words
cheese
is produced to provide human life.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, cheese, degrees, celsius, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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