Differences between countries are barely evident these days. Everyone in the world is wearing the same brand and watching the same TV channels and movies. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

It is true that differences
amid
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nations
are hardly even noticeable
in
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these days and everyone in the
world
should have to wear similar brands and watch the same
Tv
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TV
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channels and movies. I think
this
kind of development can be seen
positive
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as positive
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to some extent as it helps to reduce the discrimination and
language
barrier
amidst
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among
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nations
but it largely
affect
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the
language
and the identity of the particular
nations
. On the one hand, having a similar taste and
preference
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preferences
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of individuals
bring
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brings
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equality in the community and the discrimination level among rich and
porrer
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poorer
poor
societies will automatically disappear if they prefer homogeneity in the country. In
this
way,
nations
came closer to each other and
bring
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prosperity and peace
instead
of indulging in fights. Another point is that
,
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most individuals
faced
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language
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barrier when they have to travel
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to another
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another countries
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for business or personal purposes. By having
common
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language
and
preference
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preferences
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,
people
can freely travel to any part of the
world
.
On the other hand
, wearing
same
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the same
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brands and watching
same
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the same
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channels will make the
world
boring and
people
from other countries will never visit
to
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these
nations
because of having no cultural diversification among them. For
intance
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instance
, Goa is the main tourist attraction for
people
and
people
from every part of the
world
loves
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to visit there.
However
, choosing the similarity will
effect
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the popularity of tourist destinations.
In addition
,
people
will get fewer job opportunities in different areas.
Consequently
,
people
become unemployed and the economy of the country will
goes
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down.
Moreover
, each region
have
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their own
language
but by choosing
same
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the same
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brands
by
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people
will disappear their own
language
easily and the youth of these
nations
will certainly forget the cultural roots, sacrifice and
the
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history of their ancestors. In conclusion, some
people
favours
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the idea of having
similarity
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similarities
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in the
taste
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tastes
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and
preference
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preferences
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of individuals
either
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whether
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they are watching
tv
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TV
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channels or wearing any brand because it helps to reduce the unfairness and dialect barriers among
nations
.
Although
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, it will
proves
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bane
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for the economy
than
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rather than
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boon
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as it
affect
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affects
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their native
langauge
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language
and the identity of particular regions badly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homogeneity
  • unity
  • connectivity
  • cultural diversity
  • unique traditions
  • global influences
  • loss of identity
  • individuality
  • positive impacts
  • negative impacts
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