The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree and disagree.

Nowadays, the crisis of

energy

has

arised

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raised

arisen

a huge concern among the public.

Therefore

, some people claim that exploring safe

althernatives

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alternatives

alternative

to fossil

fuels

is the most crucial priority for

society

today. In my opinion, I agree with

this

notion to a large

extend

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. Fossil

fuels

are at risk of depletion, so it is necessary to find

alternatives

to replace the need

of

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energy

. As the

world

develops rapidly today, more

energy

is required

to

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every aspect of

society

.

However

, the fossil resources on Earth

is

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limited and

it

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they

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will be depleted in

near

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future.

As a result

, people should stress

on

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the exploration of finding new

alternatives

of

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to

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energy

to help maintain the stability of the

world

.

For example

, the discoveries of renewable

energies

has

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effectively brought hope to

mankinds

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mankind

, helping

society

to become less dependent on fossil

fuels

.

Moreover

, the development of these green

energies

has reduced the emission of harmful gases, gradually slowing down the speed of

global-warming

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, which preserves the sustainability of the globe.

In addition

, without the

energy

providing

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, many sectors of

society

would be significantly impacted.

Thus

, the need

of

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safe alternative

energies

is indispensable for the

world

's

overall

advancement.

Although

there are some other vital issues

such

as the loss of biodiversity and the excessive garbage produced by

human

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humans

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, both of these issues require the aid of technical procedures to cope with the problems, which at the same time need to be operated by

energy

.

Furthermore

, numerous scientists assert that humans should be alert

of

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the loss of fossil

fuels

and focus on exploring new

alternatives

.

Otherwise

, the whole

world

will

shot

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down

due to

the emptiness of

traditionl

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traditional

energy

. In conclusion, I agree with the concept that people should prioritize

on

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finding new safe

alternatives

to fossil

fuels

, as it is the key to

keep

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keeping

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the

world

sustainable and stable. More importantly, without the

energy

, other critical issues cannot be solved either.

Therefore

, finding alternative

energies

is now the top mission of all

the

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human beings.