The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. -> The line graph compares the urban populations of four countries between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2024.

The line graph provides information about the proportion of the total population in some Asian nations

such

as the Philippines,

Malaysia

,

Thailand

and

Indonesia

living in cities from 1970 to 2020 and

also

foresees for 2030 and 2040

Overall

,at a glance at the graph, it is clear,

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all countries in

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some years

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being a downward trend at passage of time

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, they had

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though, is expected that these trends

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more sharply by 2040. In 1970, the Philippines had the most city residents among the countries with 32% and

this

had a short difference in comparison to

Malaysia

with 30%,

then

followed by

Thailand

with just

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less than 20% and

Indonesia

with around 15%.

Although

, the proportion of the city residents of

Malaysia

and

Indonesia

increased significantly by 2020,

however

,

Thailand

's public steady remained at just less than 30,

Malaysia

after reaching

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50% in 1990, dropped gradually by 40% in

this

period.

Furthermore

, they are predicted from 2030 to 2040, all countries will face a remarkable increase in growth

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population living in cities. It seems,

Malaysia

going to hit 80%,

Indonesia

will be in second place with 60% and followed by the Philippines and

Thailand

with around 55% and 45% respectively.