The table below gives information about the salaries of high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about the salaries of high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The table illustrates the income of high school
teachers
in five
countries
, namely Australia,
Denmark
,
Luxembourg
, Korea, and Japan in the year 2009. The measurement is presented in the US
dollars
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that among the five mentioned
countries
,
Luxembourg
's newly hired
teachers
had the best financial status,
while
their counterparts in Japan had the lowest income.
Luxembourg
’s highest payment was
also
the first in the ranking.
However
, the instructors in
Denmark
reached the maximum payment in the fewest
years
. In terms of the
amount
of money gained when starting their jobs,
teachers
in
Luxembourg
are the first in the group, followed by the ones who teach in
Denmark
,
although
Danish
teachers
receive almost half that of
Luxembourg
teachers
(80000
dollars
, and 47000
dollars
in respective order. In the three other
countries
, educators are paid almost 30000
dollars
at
this
level. Considering the salary gained annually, almost the same pattern can be observed, and again
Luxembourg
stands at the top of the list, followed by
Denmark
, and instructors in other regions are paid roughly 50000
dollars
. As can be predicted, in
Luxembourg
, the educators make the maximum
amount
of money,
although
it takes 30
years
for them to get to
this
point. Korean
teachers
receive the second highest
amount
of salary after 37
years
, and
teachers
in other
countries
are paid a maximum
amount
of salary of around 55000,
although
it happens after 34
years
in Japan, but 8 and 9
years
in
Denmark
and Australia, respectively.
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  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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