The table below gives information about the salaries of high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The table illustrates the income of high school
teachers
in five countries
, namely Australia, Denmark
, Luxembourg
, Korea, and Japan in the year 2009. The measurement is presented in the US dollars
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that among the five mentioned countries
, Luxembourg
's newly hired teachers
had the best financial status, while
their counterparts in Japan had the lowest income. Luxembourg
’s highest payment was also
the first in the ranking. However
, the instructors in Denmark
reached the maximum payment in the fewest years
.
In terms of the amount
of money gained when starting their jobs, teachers
in Luxembourg
are the first in the group, followed by the ones who teach in Denmark
, although
Danish teachers
receive almost half that of Luxembourg
teachers
(80000 dollars
, and 47000 dollars
in respective order. In the three other countries
, educators are paid almost 30000 dollars
at this
level. Considering the salary gained annually, almost the same pattern can be observed, and again Luxembourg
stands at the top of the list, followed by Denmark
, and instructors in other regions are paid roughly 50000 dollars
.
As can be predicted, in Luxembourg
, the educators make the maximum amount
of money, although
it takes 30 years
for them to get to this
point. Korean teachers
receive the second highest amount
of salary after 37 years
, and teachers
in other countries
are paid a maximum amount
of salary of around 55000, although
it happens after 34 years
in Japan, but 8 and 9 years
in Denmark
and Australia, respectively.Submitted by faranakasadzadian on
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