The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the recycling cycle of
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
,
there
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are two-stage
process
involves nine main steps: collecting
plastic
bottles
and manufacturing recycled products.
In
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the beginning of the
process
, used
plastic
bottles
are gathered and driven by garbage trucks to the recycling centre where the trash will be sorted by whether they can be recycled or not.
Then
, the reusable
plastic
bottles
will be
transfered
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transferred
to the factory for
further
recycling
process
. In the factory, a compressed device is used to shape the
bottles
into blocks to
be
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easier for the crushing step, in which these blocks will be cut into small pieces. During
this
step, the crushed
plastic
bottles
then
fall down to a water tank
that is
placed underneath the machine to remove dirt and impurities. The clean crushed
then
are moved into a special machine to produce
plastic
pellets.
Finally
, these pellets will be heated at a certain temperature to form
into
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raw materials to be produced as recycled
plastic
bottles
and food containers or be taken part in the
process
of making other
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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such
as polyester clothes, recycled bags, or pencils.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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