You recently did a short coockery course. The coockery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at rhe coockery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another coockery course you would like the school to offer
Dear
sir
or Madam,
I hope Capitalize word
Sir
this
letter finds you fine,I am writing this
letter regarding the request feedback
about Change preposition
for feedback
Correct article usage
the cockery
cockery
course which I Correct your spelling
cookery
crockery
recnetly
attended at your institution .
Correct your spelling
recently
To begin
,with I have to say that was really enjoy
and I really Change the verb form
was really enjoyed
enjoy
and I have been living alone and I have to make food every day so It was funny for me,Wrong verb form
enjoyed
besides
,I learnt many recepies
from many Correct your spelling
recipes
diffrent countires
Correct your spelling
different countries
such
as:
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apply
italian
food ,Change the capitalization
Italian
indian
Change the capitalization
Indian
cusines
,Correct your spelling
cuisine
cuisines
mexican
food, and so on .
Change the capitalization
Mexican
Secondly
,I have started combining all those learing
into practicals ,Correct your spelling
learning
furthermore
,when i
Change the capitalization
I
was completed
the course ,I have Change the verb form
have completed
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
consistly
Correct your spelling
consistently
prepairing
dishes every day,Correct your spelling
preparing
Also
, on weekends I experiment with cuisines which are new to me.
I would like
recommend the school that held a cycle for people who want to learn professional cookery for 6 or 8 months.
Thank you for all the learnings ,
Best Regards,
Pardis GhobadiAdd the particle
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to structure your letter by clearly dividing it into paragraphs based on each bullet point in the task. This will help enhance coherence and cohesion.
Language Accuracy
Ensure you correct small errors to improve clarity and increase your attention to grammatical details.
Task Achievement
You successfully covered all points required in the task and provided relevant examples, which is a great approach to task achievement.
Task Achievement
The letter had a polite tone throughout, especially with a formal greeting and closing.
Task Achievement
Your enthusiasm for the course comes across clearly, which makes the letter engaging.