In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I disagree with
this
opinion that people
are not going to buy newspapers
or books
, because of this
reason which is online website
has monthly payments, however
, there are some websites
that have sorts of information
for free such
as books
or newspapers
.
Most of the websites
that publish books
or magazines charge people
a monthly payment. These websites
not only share sorts of information
free but also
receive a monthly membership
from their customers who are online. For example
, Hamshahri newspaper in my country Iran receives some money
every single month from people
who enjoy using their information
and want to read magazines or books
online. In this
way, people
cannot stop buying this
sort of information
without paying any money
because the website
that they are using charges them every month.
On the other hand
, there are some websites
that share information
for free to their members. This
kind of website
does not have so much information
free, their contents are not valuable they also
do not update books
or news and their contents are old. If these free websites
want to share new information
namely, books
or newspapers
, receive some money
for that or in other words
sell them. For example
, Audible, an application which has so many books
and podcasts only shares free podcasts on the website
but for books
, people
have to buy a membership
every three months or have an Amazon membership
. So on this
occasion, people
only can use podcasts and to receive books
they need a membership
too.
In conclusion, I cannot say I agree for sure, even though there are so many kind of websites
that provides every kind of content like books
or newspapers
and also
magazines without receiving any money
. Thereby, people
cannot stop buying books
but they can receive a limited amount of them for free.Submitted by TUTOO on
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