The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.          Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphics illustrate retail sectors bought on the Internet in 2005 and 2010 in Canada, which results are shown with percentages. The factor with the largest proportion of shopping sales in 2005 was electronics,
whereas
, in 2010 the most significant element bought was food.
Additionally
, home furnishings and video games represented the least slices of sales. The retail sector with the majority percentage in 2005 was electronics representing 35%,
however
, in 2010 had a decrease presenting a portion of 30%.
On the other hand
, in the other studied year, food was the element with the largest percentage bought at 32%.
To sum up
, video games presented the smallest percentage representing 18% in the first studied year showing an increase of 23% in the second period of the study,
in contrast
, in the
last
year Home decoration was the cause with the minority of deals at 15% which it showed a decrease, because in 2005 represented 25% of the total deals.
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