You recently attended a conference and found the facilities were inadequate and the event was poorly organized. Write a letter to the organizer of the conference. In your letter: Explain what the problems were. Tell how you felt about the event. Say what you would like them to do
Dear Sir and Madam
I am writing
this
letter regarding the recent conference
on "Environmental impact of Plastic" that I attended on
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apply
last
Monday. I believe that conference
can be more enjoyable or fun if the facilities are adequate enough and Correct article usage
the conference
event
sequence Correct article usage
the event
are
properly organized.
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is
While
I was attending the Dr.
Lui Change the punctuation
Dr
lacture
on "Correct your spelling
lecture
one time
plastic usage", I suddenly Add a hyphen
one-time
feel
dehydrated and when I Wrong verb form
felt
look
for Wrong verb form
looked
the
water, I could not find a single good source of it around the meeting room. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, Dr.
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Dr
Kim
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Kim's
conference
was schedule
at 11:00 AM and started at 11:30, even though he Change the form of the verb
scheduled
is
present in the room, sitting Wrong verb form
was
besides
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beside
the
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apply
Dr.
Lui.
Organizing Change the punctuation
Dr
such
an event is a big thing and some mistakes could happen. However
, essential things such
as water availability must be avoided by giving a
water bottles to each participant. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Furthemore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
conference
schedule is critical when people are attending from all over the Correct article usage
a conference
places
. That could Fix the agreement mistake
place
be resolve
by simply Change the verb form
be resolved
go
through the schedule Change the verb form
going
by
each phase. Change preposition
for
Except
these mistakes, Add the preposition
Except for
conference
is Add an article
the conference
real
joy to the brains.
Look forward to Add an article
a real
attend
more Change the verb form
attending
conference
like Fix the agreement mistake
conferences
this
.
Yours Faithfully
Abhi ChauhanSubmitted by vishaljangrala94 on
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single idea per paragraph
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.
logical structure
Watch for minor grammatical inaccuracies that could slightly affect clarity.
complete response
The letter addresses all the required points: explaining the problems, expressing feelings about the event, and suggesting a solution.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is appropriate for a letter to event organizers.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite