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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Parth Suhagiya, and I am writing
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 about my important
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, which I left in your hotel when I attended my meeting recently and stayed in room 102. So, when I was done with my meeting, I forgot to take my
papers
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 when I left, and I think I left my project
papers
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 in the room.
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, those
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 are very important for my upcoming project, which will be done by the company, and without those
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, I cannot set up my machine because the
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information about the materials and all other aspects of the project.
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, I want you to do that, check the room where I stayed and look for those
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, and if you find them, just revert to me with the same email, and I will arrange for someone from my company, and he will collect them. I highly appreciate your help. Thanks and regards, Parth Suhgaiya

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Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for clarity.
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Make sure to proofread for minor spelling errors (e.g., 'Suhagiya' should be consistent).
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear structure and logical flow.
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You explained the importance of the papers well, emphasizing their relevance to your project.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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