A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job.
Dear John,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. I read your letter, I have found a job
for you for several days and I want to tell you that I saw one position as an accountant for you.
I found one vacancy in the "Apex Account" company. In this
company, there is one accountant seat available and you have to handle some accounts of clients as your senior authorities provide you tasks.
Furthermore
, the starting salary is $29 per hour.
I know very well that you are a perfect fit for this
job
because you have been working as a CA past 3 years. I hope you will do this
job
very well and this
will help you in your career to gain more experience and knowledge.
I want to let you know that if you want to apply for this
job
you have to go for an interview at this
"Aext Account" company's branch in Toronto. Moreover
, you can make your profile on LinkedIn and send your resume to the apexaccount.linkedin.ca website.
I hope this
information can help you. See you soon.
Your Lovingly,
Peter.Submitted by kaverigoti2209 on
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of your letter can be improved by reordering some sections. For example, mention details about the job and why it's suitable before discussing how to apply.
task achievement
Pay attention to minor grammatical issues like 'saw one position', which could be better phrased as 'came across a position'.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and well-formed.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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