It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
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some
countries Change preposition
in some
students
are not encouraged to study science
as a subject
. The main reason behind it is due to
the education system is not appropriate for students
. As a
result
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result,
on
our economic growth in a Change preposition
to
country
Most of the educational industries are not good enough to provide quality education, therefore
, so many students
ignore the importance of science
as a subject
. For example
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't
able to apply for this
course because he wasn
't
able to full fill
the requirements given by the university. Correct your spelling
fulfil
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't
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his HSC level and no one Change preposition
at
encourage
him to take Wrong verb form
encouraged
science
as a subject
and that failed him to become an engineer.
On the other hand
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apply
science
as a subject
could danger
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prevent
country
's society to balance
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from balancing
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the workforce
country
. For instance
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due to
lower
rate of graduates from Correct article usage
the lower
science
department, Add an article
the science
this
country
wasn
't
able to continue their
tradition and profit from agriculture. They had to bring people from Correct pronoun usage
its
out side
of Correct your spelling
outside
this
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the
country
and had to invest more than local people. Therefore
, their society breakdown
into pieces and Correct your spelling
broke down
their
were damaged by Correct pronoun usage
they
this
issue.
In conclusion, to balance both workforce
and economic growth of a Correct article usage
the workforce
country
; a country
education system should be more productive to ensure their Change noun form
country's
students
are choosing right
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the right
subject
for their future career
. So, that can bring an effective improvement to the society as well.Fix the agreement mistake
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task achievement
Try to expand on the ideas presented with more detailed explanations and examples. Your arguments can be strengthened by elaborating on points, such as the educational system's flaws in more detail or the societal impacts of limited science education.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph follows logical order and doesn't jump between ideas. Try to stick to one main idea per paragraph for clarity.
coherence cohesion
Your essay features an introduction and conclusion that clearly outline the problem and offer a potential solution, creating a strong structural foundation.
task achievement
You identify key issues such as the education system's inadequacies and socioeconomic consequences, which are relevant and demonstrate comprehension of the problem.
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