Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

There are many methods that

parents

do to raise their

children

, some of them might leave positive impacts

while

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others might have negative influences. There is a parenting style in which the

parents

provide everything that

requested

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by their

children

, and permit everything that their kids want to do.

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essay will state that

this

is a bad style

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raising

children

continued

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with addressing some consequences that may occur to the

children

in the future.

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kind of way to raise kids is considered

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a terrible way. If all requests are approved,

then

the mental development of young people will be negatively affected.

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,

this

condition leads

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psychologic

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aspect will only compromise with positive responses but hard to accept negative

feedbacks

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. Indeed, in the real world, there will be many challenges/obstacles with similar probability of being responded

either

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positive

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positively

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or

negative

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negatively

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.

For instance

, the school rules provide

limitation

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to what pupils

could do

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and do not in the classroom.

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usual situation would be a crucial issue for pupils that always

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spoiled by their

parents

. As the person

goes

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older,

this

condition will have long-term influences (knock-on effects). More real indicators

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the individuals’ mental aspect will

be appeared

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. The person would likely be a dependent person with mental weakness and selfish characteristics. To illustrate

this

, spoiled persons will

be

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hard to work in a group because they put

their self

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as the centre of the world.

Furthermore

, the level of anxiety is higher

due to

lack

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of experience in facing risky

situation

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. In conclusion,

children

which given all their needs and permitted

for

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all their desires by their

parents

are raised in a negative way.

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will

cause

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bad

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influences

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to

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their characteristic in the future involving mental issues.