The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives us information about how

making

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to make

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smoked

fish

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. In general, the diagram has 13 types of produce fishing.

First,

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fish

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hunts

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are hunted

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and

transports

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transported

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to the factory until they are ready

to

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for

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the stores.

Firstly

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,

fish

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are hunted in the ocean or sea

through

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by

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the

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apply

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boat.

Then

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they carry into the ports. After that

fish

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are

freezed

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frozen

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and melted with fresh water.

Secondly

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, they are dramatically cut with a knife. Alternatively,

fish

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are cleaned with yellow colouring water and instantly that

are

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is

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smoked. At that time,

fish

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are packaged and sent into the box

which

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with

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its

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a

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temperature

is

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apply

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a

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of

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0

degree

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degrees

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. Afterwards , they are situated in the cold box and

finally

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, they are delivered

into

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to

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the

fish

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shops.