The charts below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pictures illustrate how to look at the layout of a university’s
sports
centre
at present and after reconstruction.
Overall
, the 25m pool
, seating, reception and changing room
will be unchanged. Also
, the gym
will be redeveloped. Moreover
, two
outdoor courts will be removed. However
, a leisure pool
, two
changing rooms, a sports
shop, a café, a sports
hall and two
dance studios will be built.
The outdoor courts will be replaced by a changing room
, a café, a sports
hall and two
dance studios in the east. Also
, the gym
will be reconstructed and the gym
will have more size in the east. The 25m pool
, seating, reception and changing room
will be not modified in the centre
.
The 25m pool
, seating, reception and changing room
will be not modified in the centre
. Although
, as mentioned the gym
will be redeveloped in the centre
. The outdoor courts will be removed in the west then
a leisure pool
, a changing room
and a sports
shop will be constructed in this
place.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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