The charts below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pictures illustrate how to look at the layout of a university’s

sports

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centre

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at present and after reconstruction.

Overall

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, the 25m

pool

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, seating, reception and changing

room

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will be unchanged.

Also

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, the

gym

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will be redeveloped.

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two

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outdoor courts will be removed.

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, a leisure

pool

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two

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changing rooms, a

sports

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shop, a café, a

sports

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hall and

two

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dance studios will be built. The outdoor courts will be replaced by a changing

room

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, a café, a

sports

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hall and

two

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dance studios in the east.

Also

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, the

gym

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will be reconstructed and the

gym

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will have more size in the east. The 25m

pool

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, seating, reception and changing

room

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will be not modified in the

centre

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. The 25m

pool

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, seating, reception and changing

room

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will be not modified in the

centre

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Although

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, as mentioned the

gym

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will be redeveloped in the

centre

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. The outdoor courts will be removed in the west

then

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a leisure

pool

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, a changing

room

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and a

sports

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shop will be constructed in

this

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place.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, centre, pool, room, gym, two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
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6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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