The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied maps illustrate various changes
of
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in
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the
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apply
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access to a
city
hospital from 2007 and 2010. A glance at the graph reveals that the whole area witnessed a lot of different developments and constructions over the period. In 2007, there were six bus stops
in
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on
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hospital
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the hospital
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road, which were demolished and replaced by two
roundabout
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in the south of the
city
hospital in 2010. Another striking change is the erection of
bus
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a bus
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station in the southwest of the
city
hospital from 2007 to 2010. It is interesting to note that the
city
hospital and ring road remained unchanged in the north of the region from 2007 to 2010.
Furthermore
, there
did not
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used to be
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a
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apply
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public car park next to the
city
hospital in 2007.
However
, the government built a massive public car park in the east of the
are
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area
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in 2010.
In addition
, the small car park, which was for staff and public, levelled off between 2007 and 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • infrastructure
  • modifications
  • traffic flow
  • arterial road
  • roundabout
  • one-way system
  • pedestrian paths
  • public transportation
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • bypass
  • congestion
  • diverted traffic
  • upgraded facilities
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