You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Dear Sam, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing
this
letter to you, to request your help in building a website for my new business. As you know, I started my own custom cake store
last
month and it is growing upwards. Me and my sister are very happy that we are
finally
able to set up a bakery with the help of my family and friends. We make a variety of cakes, muffins, and desserts. we specialise in creating cakes filled with art. I want you to create a website with all the details about my shop.
Firstly
, I need you to add the location details of the outlet as many can find it helpful to come and experience my store.
Secondly
, please add some options to make online orders and check out some existing options that we have in-house.
Moreover
, I have an idea, please use some high-quality images of some items or designs of cake to attract more customers and
also
a note saying how passionate we are. I have sent you all the details through email. Please reach out if you have any doubts about the information. Yours lovingly, Kumar.
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task achievement
Consider adding more specific information about what features you'd like on the website.
coherence cohesion
Use more varied sentence structures to enhance readability.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and personal tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing.
coherence cohesion
Paragraphs are used effectively to separate different ideas and requests.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • website design
  • user-friendly
  • navigate
  • aesthetic
  • branding
  • content management system (CMS)
  • responsive design
  • high-quality images
  • graphic elements
  • visual appeal
  • e-commerce
  • product portfolio
  • search engine optimization (SEO)
  • interactive features
  • testimonials
  • call-to-action buttons
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