You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear Sam, I hope

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letter finds you in good health. I am writing

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letter to you, to request your help in building a website for my new business. As you know, I started my own custom cake store

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month and it is growing upwards. Me and my sister are very happy that we are

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able to set up a bakery with the help of my family and friends. We make a variety of cakes, muffins, and desserts. we specialise in creating cakes filled with art. I want you to create a website with all the details about my shop.

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, I need you to add the location details of the outlet as many can find it helpful to come and experience my store.

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, please add some options to make online orders and check out some existing options that we have in-house.

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, I have an idea, please use some high-quality images of some items or designs of cake to attract more customers and

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a note saying how passionate we are. I have sent you all the details through email. Please reach out if you have any doubts about the information. Yours lovingly, Kumar.

manikumarchowdary111Mon Nov 18 2024

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task achievement

Consider adding more specific information about what features you'd like on the website.

coherence cohesion

Use more varied sentence structures to enhance readability.

task achievement

The letter maintains a friendly and personal tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter includes a clear greeting and closing.

coherence cohesion

Paragraphs are used effectively to separate different ideas and requests.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

website design
user-friendly
navigate
aesthetic
branding
content management system (CMS)
responsive design
high-quality images
graphic elements
visual appeal
e-commerce
product portfolio
search engine optimization (SEO)
interactive features
testimonials
call-to-action buttons

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