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Band 5.5

there is a public park near where you live. you have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. write a letter to local newspaper. in your letter

#park #council #newspaper
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Dear Sir or Madam The main reason why
Iam
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I am
 addressing you is that I want to
exprees
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express
 my disapproval against
puting
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putting
 local parks up for sale and suggest some alternatives. First things First let me introduce
mysealf
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myself
. my name is lord mike who has been living in
this
 city for more than a decade I live
in
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 the
opsite
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opposite
 street of the park . I oppose
this
 auction for Several reasons one of that reasons is that green space is the only one in
this
 town and covers huge space
also
 it
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serves
alot
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a lot
 of the Neighborhoods
also
 it's
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consider
considered
 to them
place
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 of Gathering and doing
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a lot
 of
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family
 activity , the big Area it
cover
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benfit
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benefit
benefits
 the town and make it more
Appealing
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 to move to it , on top of the point
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 had mentioned for all the
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people
 had live in our town Memories in it that led strong Connection in our
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heart
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 for that spot . I hope
from
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you to consider not selling the park for the Value it
heald
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held
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 in the
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 of our people. Best regards,
lord
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 mike.
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single idea per paragraph
Try breaking down complex ideas into separate paragraphs for better flow.
logical structure
Consider organizing your letter into clear sections: introduction, reasoning, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
You have a clear greeting and closing in your letter, which shows good structure.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is persuasive and appropriate for the task.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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