The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who have changed where they live either in the
last
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years
, 3-5 Use synonyms
years
and not within the Use synonyms
last
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years
.
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It is clear that
the 40-49-year-old group has the highest figure. Linking Words
While
other categories have similar amounts.
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To begin
with, the 20-20-year-old group is very close to the next ages. They have the same total percentages. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the 40-49- year-old people prefer to move their homes 3-5 Linking Words
years
ago with 55 per cent. With a decrease in the second line compared to 20-39-year-olds. Use synonyms
In addition
, the biggest sudden in the oldest. They did not transfer the houses in the Linking Words
last
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years
. But they scored the lowest red bar in the statistics. it's easy to notice that it records only 17%
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On the other hand
, it's impossible to increase rates. With other expectations of sudden changes. the primary reason is the huge Linking Words
fluctuated
between some parts of the chart.Replace the word
fluctuation
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