A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called "the book that influenced me most" Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced me most. describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. Yesterday, I received a letter from a Magazine, and they were asking for my reviews for an article regarding a

book

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which fascinates me the most.

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I would really appreciate

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it that

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that

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I get the chance to write about my opinion on one of my

favorite

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books which is “The Atomic Habits” written by James Clear.

This

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book

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is about

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apply

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how one can change their bad habits to good ones by just

doing

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making

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small changes in day-to-day life. I

implement

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the formula of

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, and it really changed my life

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, I used to find difficulties in waking up early and did not focus on my health. When I started reading

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book

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and

implement

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that formula which is written in

this

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book

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in the form of diagrams and other illustrations, it worked. I would recommend

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it to

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individuals

those

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apply

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who

wants

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to improve their

life

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and

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they did

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not know where to start. So,

this

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book

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gives them

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right direction. I believe my letter would be helpful for you. If you need any kind of assistance, please feel free to contact me.

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you for contacting me.

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Sincerely, Avneet Kaur

sidhu.avneet07Tue Nov 19 2024

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coherence cohesion

Consider reorganizing the letter to have a stronger introduction that clearly states your purpose for writing.

language

Try to avoid repetitive phrases like "I implement the formula... and it really changed my life," and use varied expressions to keep the reader engaged.

task achievement

The letter presents a clear and complete response to the task, describing the book and its influence as well as recommending it to others.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and courteous, making a good impression on the reader.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

influenced
contributions
readers
'The Alchemist'
Paulo Coelho
embarks
journey
personal legend
valuable
life lessons
inspiring
pursue
themes
following one's heart
seeking adventure
embracing the unknown
resonate
wide range
potential
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