The map show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The maps demonstrate alternatives that happened for Bell Hill Farm at 2 points in time namely, 1976 and 2006.
Overall
, it was important that the land that had a range of animals and agriculture areas with their tools were changed by new facilities.
According to
the graphs, the road and the farmhouse had the same position as the prior time;
however
, the storage, at the top of the road was the area for the agricultural machines, was replaced by the parking, which was for cars;
additionally
, in the farmyard, in the centre of
this
region, built recreation area. The pictures illustrate that in 1976, at the left of the district, we can see the cow shed and chicken;
thereafter
, the cow shed was changed by student housing and the chicken area was destroyed.
In addition
, in the north, at the previous time, was bam that had corn and other goods;
nevertheless
, now
this
place was altered by a multimedia room.
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