The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph depicts
Australia
's total exports to four countries between 1990 and 2012, with the data shown in percentages over the years.
Overall
, China showed an ascending trend throughout the period, which was
in contrast
to the three countries that experienced either fluctuation
and
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or
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a downward tendency over time. Looking in more detail,
Australia
exported just over 25%
in
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Japan, representing the highest percentage in 1990, even though after that
Australia
decreased their export to Japan until the end of the period.
Although
shipping to China became the smallest number in the initial period at approximately 3%, it gradually grew, surpassing the USA and Japan above the year 2000 and reaching a peak of 27% in 2012. America made up fluctuation in the first 3-period before dropping significantly for one in twenty in 2010 and rebounding slightly in the final year.
On the other hand
, India mirrored the graph with the US in 2010, reaching the highest portion of
Australia
exported to
this
country, just over 5%.
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