The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart
provide
information about the change level Change the verb form
provides
number
of Asian elephants
in 1997 and 2004.
Overall
it's clear that bar
chart in India has Correct article usage
the bar
largest
Change the article
the largest
number
in two years while
the lowest counries
is China.
In 1997, India arrived population of Correct your spelling
countries
elephants
to under 10000 after that Myanmar
Change noun form
Myanmar's
arrived
to above 5000 because Verb problem
population increased
the
Correct article usage
apply
elephants
is
popular in two countries, and people Change the verb form
are
used
Wrong verb form
use
a
lotCorrect pronoun usage
them a
of
. The lowest Change preposition
apply
counries
Correct your spelling
countries
how's
used Verb problem
that
elephants
in china
around 1000 after that luos and Cambodia arrived between (0_1000).
It is clear in 2004 India increased the Capitalize word
China
number
for
7500. In the next Change preposition
to
countries
Myanmar arrived to Add a comma
countries,
to
5000 Remove the redundancy
apply
while
anthor
countries Correct your spelling
another
has
lowest Change the verb form
have
number
population of elephants
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, elephants with synonyms.
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