The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates alterations to a cinema from 1980 to now.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the number of theatres has now increased from two to five in the present era, while
the count of toilet
is still unchanged.
Fix the agreement mistake
toilets
To begin
with, extra amenities including relax room and DVD shop were absent in the 1980s but will be accessible to the public in 2024. However
, drinks were the only thing served as refreshments back then
. Additionally
, food is also
provided to them today.
Talking about facilities that are in the same place as before, it is a restroom and ticket counter. Interestingly, there was a huge space for the car park in past but it now vanishes from the cinema, it may be possible that it is now beside the hall.Submitted by k7jassu on
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