You live in an english speaking country and you want to do some voluntary and unpaid work in a dveloping country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long - Explain why you want to do voluntary work - State what your skills and experience are
Dear Manager,
I saw your application for
volunteering
program. I was excited because I wanted to go to South Africa as a volunteer doctor.
Correct article usage
the volunteering
This
is my big dream. When I was a university student, I dreamed of going to South Africa and becoming a volunteer doctor.
This
country is so poor and the child did not go to hospital. They do not see a doctor or maybe die. I am very upset about this
situation because ıf we feel ill and we want to a doctors we become doctors because we are very lucky but this
child is not lucky.
If you are choosing me I am really happy. I have a 3-month annual leave and I working in South Africa for 3 months. This
is not enough I know but I do not have an other
annual leave maybe I would like permission to hospital but I am not sure Correct your spelling
another
this
thing.Change preposition
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your letter with distinct paragraphs for clarity.
task achievement
Make sure to fully cover all the required points in the letter prompt. For example, explicitly state your skills and experience.
greeting and closing
Your opening and closing are polite and appropriate, making a good impression.
suitable writing tone
Your motivation for volunteering is clearly expressed with genuine passion and concern.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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