The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The chart compares an overview of the average daily
hours
spent by travellers from China, the United States, Turkey, and Brazil on freedom activities during their holidays in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, reading a
book
in holiday
time
was the most favourable activity (21
hours
)
while
the figure for visiting places was as half as that of reading a
book
.
Furthermore
, Brazilian sightseers spend more spare
time
at the beach. Chinese and American visitor choose to read a
book
in their liberty
time
, with the former spending roughly 8
hours
a day
while
the latter spent 5
hours
. Meanwhile, Turkish and Brazilian journeyer spent the same spending for reading a
book
, with both 4
hours
.
While
spending leisure
time
at the beach was the highest popular option among Brazilian tourists, with being at the beach for 6
hours
, other groups of excursionists including Chinese, American and Turkish spent 1 hour less each.
Nevertheless
, the figure for visiting places was the least favourable among all groups of foreigners.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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