The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, from 2004 to 2012.
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the fraction of Australian people who graduated from 2 various academic subjects namely, Correct your spelling
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math
and Other and had full-time job
,and the amount of their incomes between 2004 and 2012.
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inahbitants
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inhabitants
reduced
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was reduced
while
their salaries increased over the period of 8 years.
According to
the line diagram, at the start, Math
graduates
, the main field background that their graduated found teh
full-time jobs in 2004, scored just roughly 80% ; Correct your spelling
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then
its trend climbed marginally and hit the vertex at nearly 85% , which was
the same as Other Unnecessary verb
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graduates
, in 2008; however
, it declined slightly to just over 75%. Other graduates
touched approximately 60% in 2004; thereafter
, it rose moderately and reached the highest point at almost 90% in 2006 after that, it fell somewhat and in 2012 it reported just under its portion at
in 2004.
The table demonstrates that both Change preposition
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math
graduates
and Other graduates
recorded the same number at
in 2004 and 2006 at 41,000 and 43,000. both of them improved, so Later Change preposition
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Math
formed 56,000 in 2012; additionally
, other ones composed 51,000 in 2012.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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